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The Child Abuse That Is Legal

The Child Abuse That Is Legal By Elton Camp If, to feed a kid, a parent should fail There’s a good chance of going to jail Or if a child is being savagely hit The parent may be declared unfit Fail to send a youngster to school And a heavy fine will be the rule Allow a child to go dirty & ill-clad In the eyes of the law that’s very bad Likewise, if a parent often lies drunk The right to custody may well be sunk If a child’s not strapped in a kiddie seat Punishment by the law one could meet But a thing equally bad to all of these Is to cause a child to gasp & sneeze Keep him in a place filled with smoke So that he will have to cough and choke

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Date: 2/7/2012 10:21:00 AM
wee said! there are laws being proposed to make this a crime, too, but i think the tobacco industry is too powerful to ever let them get passed.
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Date: 2/7/2012 10:33:00 AM
Hey Ilene, I am sure you are correct. When push comes to shove, big business wins out most every time. To earn one's living from tobacco is a detestable occupation. Elton
Date: 2/7/2012 4:13:00 AM
This is well put Elton, one can often neglect what substance one is introducing to their or others children , thank you for sharing, well done, brenda : )
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Date: 2/7/2012 5:13:00 AM
Morning Brenda, Thanks for reading and taking time to comment. I experience this as a child and recall well barely being able to see the opposite wall in our house due to cigarette smoke from my father (who ultimately died of lung cancer of a type directly caused by smoking). Riding in the car filled with smoke was horrible. Elton

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