The Cherished Ones

Dancing in the rain, dancing through ash.
Just more pain, when I get another lash.
I knew they'd appear, the cherished ones.
Watch for another tear, for soon I'll be done.
While I'm waiting, I am wasting away.
Full of hating, there's nothing I could say.
You take away my life, you yet again lied.
My heart met the knife, I forever died.
I silently gasped, "But you promised."
I slowly collapsed, and my fire diminished.
Without hesitation, not missing a beat,
You saw my retalliation, to my death and defeat.
Dancing on my grave, dancing through the night.
You held my star, you felt the burn.
I've recieved many a scar, now it's your turn.
I've never stopped dancing, for I hear your song.
The sorrow's enhancing, for I've known misery for so long.
All these thoughts, upon leaving.
My soul you bought, now I stop believing. 
That melody, is so beautiful.
I cannot see, the marionette strings you pull.
I'm dancing on by, through our song.
Now's my time to die, or am I wrong?
Dancing and dying, how can I stop your lying?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Loving Iii Avatar
December 3, 2008 at 11:56 AM
this is very personal and open and painful. i know whats going on. but you put in in a poetic way very good. John H Loving III
Matheny Avatar
December 1, 2008 at 2:22 PM
So Sad, So Painful. . . I Love IT!! *.* Love Alexz P.S. sorry :(
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