The Cheater

Past the corridor in that dark temple of doom,  
long after when he should have been at home,    
inside he frolics with his young, lusty mistress,  
borne by the darkness that is their sole witness. 

Oh the fire that the night itself cannot extinguish, 
youthful flame that will not simply fade or vanish; 
and the dawn breaks with his conscience pricked, 
yet the game must continue while the hours ticked.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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September 18, 2010 at 5:20 PM
Hello, Wilfredo here I am stopping by to say hi and CONGRATULATIONS! What a delightful poem. Had fun reading your featured poem of the week. Take care,.. p.d.
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September 18, 2010 at 2:04 PM
Congratz on the feature, i love this poem
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September 18, 2010 at 8:44 AM
congratulations on being featured. nicely written; brings back past experiences .... thanks, chuck
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September 13, 2010 at 12:24 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week here at PoetrySoup Fred. Love, Carol
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September 13, 2010 at 7:18 AM
Yes, Vince. Specifically, 6th fleet !!! Thank you. All the best to you all.
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September 13, 2010 at 6:39 AM
He must have been a sailor. Congrats Fred on your featured write. Vince
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September 12, 2010 at 4:07 PM
Congrats Wilfredo on your featured poem this week on the Soup... a nice one to share with us all..with luv..
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September 12, 2010 at 2:14 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured.. I could feel the emotion come through not of the mistress or the cheater but the writer who had been hurt or knew someone personally who had been hurt..Sara
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