The Charge of the Plight Brigade

Class assignment: continue a famous line someone else has corrupted
(with more corruption)


Into the valley of Meth
Rode the six hundred
Who would not ride out

Their faces pale, their figures gaunt
"We've found it," they said
And so they did

Searching for the greatest gifts
In the deepest shadows
They kept onward

It was waiting there
Shining in the darkness
Their last reward.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Tian Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 7:13 AM
man this is so good!!!
Tian Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 7:19 AM
ignore, another student's prank
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