The Character of Me

All those painfull little memories
 so neatly stuffed down inside,
Helped to build the wall around my heart 
Where my soul chose to reside.
So many scars and battle wounds
 Only God alone can see,
But these are things he destined my life to carry,
To build the character of me.
So today i am much stronger 
than i ever thought that i would be,
And ive gathered some wisdom and some patience,
On the journey to be free.
I find im not hasty to get angry 
And I think before i speak,
I stand my ground when i know im right
To show that im not weak.
People can love or hate me
 I cant determine how they choose,
But i will not carry a grudge or hate,
Because my inner peace i just cant lose.
So if i seem withdrawn and choose
 not to socialize,
Its because the only thing that matters 
Is how God sees me in his eyes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/18/2016 9:14:00 AM
Sometimes I feel to void all... no need for the corruption of others. I feel this poem comes from your inner self. Love the ending very much. Linda
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Date: 9/19/2016 3:09:00 AM
Guess ive been let down to the point i feel its just me and God now. Not a bad place to be. Thanks again Linda. This all means more than you know
Date: 8/9/2016 8:04:00 AM
- A beautiful poem Carl, with deep feelings - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/9/2016 6:11:00 AM
Difficult self-discovery made relatively easy ... enjoyed reading ...
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Date: 8/9/2016 6:10:00 AM
Difficult self-discovery made relatively easy ... enjoyed reading ...
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Date: 8/9/2016 3:08:00 AM
Alone time is good to recharge the soul. The artists way of formulating thoughts that wait to be written for another day. Your writing is real.
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