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The Chaos of Us

You  look  at  me  and       I   g e  t     l    o    s     t
You look lost               
                      You STAND before me in lust
                      I lay down below you in love
 
 I talk  too much.............. 
                    I      l   o   n   g  for  you to listen 
                                   Instead I hear a DEAFENING silence                                                               
You  stutter a  staccato..    s i g h
 
   We volunteer play pretend prisoners....... s e e k i n g
To    navigate   stay     captivated……     until      
               Escaping through a [hidden] trap door    
 Freedom forfeits reason and the ransom that was you and me
 
                  ‘he’ stands before ‘she’
                        Misunderstanding “me”

  She lies she forgets                     The truth he remembers
 
           The news about us
                         Rewinds as we watch….
              You preview a forecast.... de je vous….......
                                                Pause.. my predictions - press replay
 
I will not harden my heart-sow the seeds to soften your soul
 
                    You    rescue    me   -    I        save          you

The   danger   in   you   deploys  the  safety   in   me

           And then finally you see…………………………
                               you finally see                                       me.....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/13/2014 9:05:00 AM
Fantastic! Straight to my favorites. I like the chaotic way you presented the words, a frenzy of emotions. We all long to be seen. I believe I can see you.
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