The Changing Night

The Changing night…

The Changing Night…
I am not the mountain; I am not the sea,
I am just a man that wanted you to see.
You are full of moonlight; you are full of sun;
I live in the darkness; let you be the one.
I am not above you; you are not below,
I'm in the darkness; with sunshine, I will glow.
I am filled with shadows, shadows full of night;
Me and all the roses, waiting for the light.
Hoping for the sunshine, hoping for the rain,
weary from this madness, sorrow, loss, and pain.
I am from this earth, but dreaming of the moon, 
One day, I’ll wake up from a dream that ended soon.
How come you are silent? Silent is the night.
Nights end in the mornings; mornings are delight.
You are like the sunshine; you are like the rain.
Come and kiss me, darling; I shall live again.
My pain will be gone sooner than never.
Let us change the night soon, always together.

8/16/16  Haloo

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Date: 8/31/2016 2:58:00 PM
This is a really beautiful verse about the blending of opposites, Pashang "I am from this earth, but dreaming of the moon" ... just wonderful musing. Nice to read you yet again, poet. My only confusion was in your last line, "Let's changing the night soon always together" .... do you mean to say, "Let's change night, soon always together"... without the -ing?
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/31/2016 7:11:00 PM
Thank you Tim....No.. The night does mean "the night" it represents a metaphor for darkness, sadness, sorrow.... Sometimes, you have to read between the lines in order to get the essence of my work. The title of this write is , "The changing night".
Date: 8/28/2016 10:33:00 AM
this is a fun write, Pashang, God painted such a beautiful universe of art so pleasant . Hugs Eve
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/28/2016 3:26:00 PM
Thanks Eve..
Date: 8/24/2016 5:15:00 PM
Just let me grab my coat.....
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/24/2016 9:21:00 PM
Take me with you..
Date: 8/24/2016 2:51:00 PM
Beautiful and romantic lines and wonderful rhyme Pashang - thanks for sharing:-) hugs Jan xx
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/24/2016 9:20:00 PM
Thank you Jan...
Date: 8/21/2016 9:32:00 AM
wow, from the very start, i was so impressed with this heartfelt poem that employs such great imagery. I will make this a FAVE
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/21/2016 10:42:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, you are so nice...
Date: 8/20/2016 6:34:00 AM
Both charming and romantic, Pashang - An excellent write! My very best regards as always. Your friend. :) john P.s A seven!
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/20/2016 11:50:00 AM
Thanks John.... you're so kind...
Date: 8/19/2016 8:31:00 PM
I really like the flow and imagery of this poem. Beautifully expressed. Thanks for sharing this. -G
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/20/2016 11:48:00 AM
Thank you my friend....
Date: 8/19/2016 7:44:00 PM
Pashang my friend, you always write such beautiful poems. It seems you have a deeper insight to life at times. Maybe someday you will teach me how to look inside. I love it.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/20/2016 11:48:00 AM
My dear DT, my insight is so deep that made hole in my soul...
Date: 8/19/2016 6:55:00 PM
Nice romantic write Pashang!:)
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/20/2016 11:46:00 AM
Thanks Cheryl....
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