The Chandelier Shines

the chandelier shines
with the moon hovering o’er
through the dark window
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Hind Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 10:17 AM
I like this haiku. Now on to another poem...
Rodrigues Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 4:45 PM
:) Thank you!
Wolf Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 7:53 PM
Yes! It's a great image, Kim. One I see in my neighborhood, and I truly adore it ...
Rodrigues Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 1:40 PM
Thank you, Gershon!
Goldsmith Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 1:46 PM
I enjoyed reading this write. You are on a Haiku writing roll. Good Job... Have a great day...........
Rodrigues Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 2:38 PM
Thank you so much!
Pandit Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 5:37 AM
Perfectly captured moment, Kim--splendid write.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 6:27 AM
Thank you, Vijay!
Alhemaidy Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 9:16 PM
Lovely!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 6:27 AM
Thank you, Abdullah!
Romios Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 8:58 PM
Wonderful haiku. It really sets a picturesque setting…. reminding me, of the crystal days of my younger years, With thanks ….Pangie
Rodrigues Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 6:27 AM
Thank you, Pangie!
Roper Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 8:04 PM
have got the windows 2 way .. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 8:32 PM
You have to catch it at the right time :) Thanks, Eve!
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