The Challenge

The Challenge
By Franklin Price
5/12/2015

The challenge of a rhyming poem
Having rhythm to it too
Is much like living daily life
In everything we do

The Ebb and flow of words on page
Contemplation for each phrase
Planning for our lives tomorrow
Contending with remaining days

Don't think too hard to find the word
That makes sense and will belong
Live your life with no regret
By doing right and never wrong

Think about the story 
How the reader it will touch
Give  of yourself to others 
Don't think of yourself so much

The words will come if meant to be
As will the rhythm and the rhyme
The challenge of the life we live
Will resolve itself in time
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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March 17, 2016 at 5:02 PM
Flow without flowing to the flow you write...Mighty!
Price Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 3:07 PM
And so it goes. Thanks for visiting.
Price Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 5:37 PM
This is a very comforting read. The substance of it appeals to both the poet and the theorist.
Price Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 10:07 PM
Thanks Albert, please come again
Misra Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 6:08 AM
What you wrote, my friend, is crystal clear And so beautifully put to light One need not toil or labour hard Everything will fall in place, there's no need to fight. (Loved your flow and the theme. Thank you so much)
Price Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 8:16 AM
Thank you so much. You have to go with the flow. a good way to live life also. thanks for visiting
Misra Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 6:10 AM
Written directly in the comments box. The "Return" Stroke didn't seem to work.
Binner Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 7:51 PM
In my opinion, this is a well constructed poem with a meaningful message.
Tate Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 9:33 AM
Aha! You've made it sound so easy. And for you I believe it is. I have to work a little harder, but it gets easier with time. And, being an octogenarian, I've had quite a bit of time.
Price Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 9:57 AM
Thanks for your time To comment this rhyme It won't be a sin If you visit again Keep at it, it's personally rewarding for me.
Mckeithan Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 6:26 AM
Hello Franklin, Like this poem because I struggle with fitting rhyme and rhythm together. Mine never seem to resolve. Oliver
Price Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 9:59 AM
Thanks for visiting. If you like rhythm and rhyme, keep working. It's challenging and fun. Come again
Saxena Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 9:53 PM
Nice poem
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February 28, 2016 at 9:59 AM
Thanks for visiting, come again
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May 12, 2015 at 2:42 PM
enjoyed this rhyme Franklin~luv skat~
Price Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 10:01 AM
So sorry I've taken so long to thank you for your support. You're always there.
Rv Avatar
May 12, 2015 at 10:01 AM
This is a lovely one!!! :D :D :D
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February 28, 2016 at 10:06 AM
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February 28, 2016 at 10:03 AM
Thank you Sneha. please visit again.
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