Sam Scott Poet Rhyme

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"A smile remains the most inexpensive gift I can bestow on anyone and yet it's powers can vanquish kingdoms." – Og Mandino

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A Sam Scott poem:
31st May 2024
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The Chair

I'm frozen here
And shall remain
While anaesthetic
Eases pain 

My lips are fat
My tongue just lies
No words untrue
While spittle flies 

A mouth aghast
While tools engage 
And rubber fingers
Squeak outrage

Construction
Of the oral kind
So mastication 
Is refined

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Tonye George July 17, 2024 at 3:58 AM Amazing words Sam. Very beautiful picture. Going to the dentist comes with so much pain. One of the worst pains to experience. I hope I find the courage to go see mine. Sam Scott July 22, 2024 at 3:12 AM Dear Tonye - I do really appreciate your visit, not to the chair, but to my poem. Blessings to you S :) x

Deb M June 2, 2024 at 1:44 PM Oh my Sam….l just looked at the picture first and my stomach dropped! Ha then l read the poem and it dropped even more!!…..l am one of those people who cannot and l mean cannot ha stand going to the dentist! A very effective well written poem….a job well done!! Hehe….Debx Deb M June 3, 2024 at 6:35 AM No trauma Sam….l just walk passed a dentist and heyho the stomach drops….just a big bubbikins!! Debx Sam Scott June 3, 2024 at 5:41 AM Deb, I am so sorry to have caused you such trauma and a visceral reaction too! Thankfully my dentist is a great guy. Bless you for your comment, though, best not fave this one.. Sam ;) x

Daniel Henry Rodgers June 2, 2024 at 12:31 PM Dear Sam, your dental scenes are brilliant! Frozen lips, spittle flying, rubber fingers squeaking outrage - brilliantly captures the experience. "Construction of the oral kind" is clever wordplay. Fantastic portrayal through unique perspective! Blessings, My Friend, Daniel Sam Scott June 3, 2024 at 5:38 AM Very kind of you to say Daniel - there is a lot of thinking time in that chair!! Sam :)

Funom Makama June 2, 2024 at 10:48 AM so well technically elaborate. Are you a dentist? Sam Scott June 3, 2024 at 5:38 AM I have an engineering background and so these details do not escape me, perhaps that is why I give the impression. The roles are probably quite similar in practical terms. Thanks for your astute observation! Sam :)