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The Cedar

A beautiful cedar developed easily,
Planted in my garden so peacefully.
A striking exemplar in deep verdant green.
Keeps my delightful backyard nice and clean.

Reddish scented tall upright virgin wood
One needs to study its habit and understood.
No one should think of pruning without learning
One must be sage and be more discerning.

Evergreen framework, growing highly incensed,
An unpleasant-tasting resin, a squirrel’s defence.
Pollination takes place in Autumn,
Until Summer cones shed their blossom.

Rustic stance to universal view wonderful
Look, is not the garden now more colourful?
How tall it grows, how fragrant is its bark
And yet beneath its branches, it’s cool and dark

Contest Alpha Lines
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Joseph May
27 July 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kiser Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 11:42 AM
I love cedars, have a nice red one in my backyard; I also lost one a few years back and kept some of the wood for carving. Beautifully penned and leaves the reader feeling great.
Edmonds  Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 4:00 PM
Victor I love this poem and I simply adore trees, bare or covered in leaves, silent they stand, so much they hear and see, yet secrets are safe with them, they’re discreet… Belle
Kulkarni Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 11:30 AM
What a beautiful tree!! I learned a lot about Cedars from your poem!! Thanks for sharing it Victor!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 3:46 AM
Enjoyed this very much! Lover of trees ~
Poet Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 7:30 PM
Thanks to your educational and beautiful poem, I've learned a great deal more about these amazing trees. I really liked the imagery you came up with. This poem discusses the advantages of having this tree in your own garden in a beautiful manner. Without a question, a winner.
Dietrich Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 4:34 PM
I still have not really studied out this challenge but of the ones I've seen so far, I really like yours, Victor.
Buehler Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 12:13 PM
I know a lot more about these magnificent trees, thanks to this informative and lovely poem. This is a fine contest entry, Victor. Good luck. :)
Andresen Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 7:19 AM
- Majestic tree, Victor ... you have done a great honor on it ... beautiful :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 5:43 AM
Skillfully executed, Victor, despite the complexity of contest rules. Much enjoyed the imagery you created. No doubt a winner.
Daniel Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 3:02 AM
This must have been hard work, but you make it look so easy, Victor, brilliant poem and content:)
Cunningham Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 1:25 AM
Great entry for the contest Victor, you chose a beautiful tree to write about. Tom
Skelly Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 1:08 AM
Dear Victor, I struggled all day with Alpha Line poetry. This one ticks all the boxes. I found this contest incredibly difficult...Well done...Delice
Buhagiar Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 3:13 AM
I can assure you I had to write it over two days and research a bit too. I have never seen a cedar in my life.
Kannan Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 12:10 AM
The tree is so beautiful and also your poetry... Great description... Good luck in the contest...
Retro Avatar
July 27, 2021 at 11:22 PM
A wonderful expression of nature. Thank you Victor.
Roper Avatar
July 27, 2021 at 8:04 PM
Great poem and perfect for the contest, good luck
Y. Avatar
July 27, 2021 at 7:53 PM
WoW! Victor, This is a good entry for the contest. You made it look easy; I am struggling to come with something. Nice descriptions of cedars, good imagery as well. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great evening:-) Alexis
Hawkins Avatar
July 27, 2021 at 7:50 PM
What a magnificent tree. A lovely poem that describes the benefits of having this tree in your own garden. I enjoyed reading this poem. Thank you Victor
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