Mystic Rose Rose Poet Couplet

The Ceasing Of Lidia Sirello

She touched each one but soon they cleared like smoke
little infant rogues, always ready for the heady toke   

She prayed to the Gods above but all she got was pain 
drenched to the bone by torrents that gave way to rain 

So in the end she chose the middle way of no return 
Icarus moments in the sun that didn't crash or burn

Resting in God's love she got to see the other side,   
feeling vibrant and blissful like the slow ebbing tide.

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Maria Williams October 9, 2024 at 12:05 AM A touching poem Vie, I hadn't read SO's comment and your reply, and I too googled her. So coincidental that you wrote about this extraordinary lady. You must have gone back into the past. A beautiful poem indeed.Hugs Maria

Silent One October 6, 2024 at 10:00 AM A beautiful and touching tribute.. I googled to see who she was.. inspirational person.. Mystic Rose Rose October 7, 2024 at 3:35 AM Oh dear, I created the name from my imagination, I didn't realize she existed lol, Now you got me looking her up too Silent One, thanks for the comment, and the interest.

Hiya Sharma October 5, 2024 at 10:41 AM This is so touching and heartfelt.. Our souls can feel so much exhausted by all the bloodstorms they have to go through ~ despite all, that flame of faith keeps burning but it may too, flicker and fade at some point... I felt the ache in your words so deeply. The divine light is our ultimate guardian who will finally lead us to hope and home, at the end of the day. Loved reading this, my best wishes to you ~ Mystic Rose Rose October 5, 2024 at 11:47 AM What a pleasure it was to read your heart felt comment dear Hiya, thank you for always remembering me

Ink Empress October 5, 2024 at 3:16 AM This is so deep and beautiful how youv written this dear rose, oneday all pain would end, when we reach the other side where eternal light will forever guide us! Pleasure reading your work. Sending you light always Mystic Rose Rose October 5, 2024 at 3:33 AM Thank you for reading Ink, it is early morning here, your the first person to reach me lol, have a blessed day dear !