The Caveman

the den dark and ripe
the caveman lumbers upward
in search of his mate

10/22/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Wolf Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 3:19 PM
Gives new meaning to the combo word -- Lumber Jack! (Back to my man cave now. Grunt). :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 8:52 PM
LOL!
Allison Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 4:11 PM
great imagery Kim:-) hugs Jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 4:18 PM
Thanks, Jan! <3 Kim
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 3:49 PM
Fantastic for the senses!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 4:18 PM
Thanks, Maureen! <3 Kim
Michael Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 3:13 PM
Even the caveman lumbers upward...for the ultimate prize of a mate...survival...Nice write...All the best Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 3:15 PM
Thanks, Arturo!
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