The Cave

When I entered the 
           cave i met with darkness
of the devil's wrath
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Allison Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 7:42 AM
A very deep poem Honesty:-) hugs Jan xx
Duncan Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 6:29 PM
Oh, I like this, very nice ;} thank you 4 reading remember us, my mom and dad had good memories, so I hope I do too ;}
Fillmore Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 9:34 AM
This is wonderful, excellent write! Thanks Honesty for your comment on my poem! much appreciated:)
M V Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 2:23 AM
Nice imagery of 'cave',Honesty.Sweet haiku
Kendrick Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 6:28 AM
That would be a scary place for sure...I am glad that I chose this one to read this morning..Your presence at my work lifted my spirits..Sara
Neels Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 9:42 AM
Interesting haiku Honesty, really enjoyed it!
Dietrich Avatar
November 4, 2010 at 11:21 PM
oooh, good one, honesty. Let me know this cave so I can avoid it (I dreamed of the devil once, a very scary dream!!!)
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