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The Cat's Meow - Lune 4

the cat's meow 
 echoes through the misty forest
  across distant hills
            ---
 Collom  Lune - 3/5/3/ words.

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Sara Kendrick

August 23, 2015 at 7:37 AM

Don't know if there is a contest featuring this or not but reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

August 16, 2015 at 11:03 PM

What a wonderful imagery Joseph! Congrats on big win!

Kim Merryman

August 16, 2015 at 10:24 PM

I like the image you have created with this lune, Joseph! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Poet Destroyer A

August 16, 2015 at 8:43 PM

Hi Joseph, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

Skat A

August 16, 2015 at 1:40 AM

Joseph, congratulations in Andrea's "Pretty Little Lunes contest" SKAT Love

Jan Allison

August 15, 2015 at 7:27 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations Jospeh:-) hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance

August 15, 2015 at 7:13 AM

Meow...Nicely done, grats on your win ;)

Paul Callus

August 15, 2015 at 5:52 AM

A most creative take on this lovely visual, Joseph! I now hear congratulations echoing! ~ Well done! // paul

Andrea Dietrich

August 15, 2015 at 1:03 AM

Joseph, this one I did not have in the top 3 at first. But the more I reviewed it, I just loved it more and more. For one thing, I love cats, but also, the "Idea" of that lonely meow, it was so cool to imagine it. Also I love the word play. This is the Cat's Meow for ME! Congrats.

Joseph May

August 15, 2015 at 7:41 PM

Thank you for the inspiration and the placement Andrea... I wanted to mention the fallen tree and the woman in the visual but could not work it in...hugs

Jan Allison

August 5, 2015 at 3:23 AM

Lovely interpretation of the visual - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

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