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The Caterpillar

I watched a caterpillar climb a tree Wondering why in the world not me, Taking it as a fortuitous sign While seeing that poor critter climb. Holding my breath with squinted eyes Thinking to myself, how very wise We humans are by strange design While seeing that poor critter climb. Minute by minute in our eternal now His journey and mine combined somehow, Over the branches and through the vines While seeing that poor critter climb. Under summer skies and wandering winds Waiting to see where his journey ends, When butterfly wings suddenly spread And that critter flies before my eyes, instead. © Terrell Martin, 02/09/2025

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Date: 2/20/2025 4:49:00 AM
Awww such a beautiful poem Terrell…..especially the last stanza! Debx
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Date: 2/20/2025 10:53:00 AM
Undeserved visits l think not Terrell you are a wonderful poet and reading your words brings me joy my friend! Debx
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Terrell Martin
Date: 2/20/2025 8:28:00 AM
Hello Dear Deb and thank you for reading and commenting so kindly as you always do. You never disappoint me with your undeserved visits and words of encouragement. I also can't wait to visit your poetry and repay your kindness. Until then, God bless, Terrell
Date: 2/19/2025 6:48:00 AM
Lovely piece Terrell, really enjoyed this one, I used to remember walking home from school watching the caterpillar walk across the road, I lived out in the country in thesevdays. Have a great day, hope you are well. Blessings,Gordon
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Terrell Martin
Date: 2/19/2025 9:26:00 AM
Thanks again, Gordon. It's always a pleasure hearing from you and commenting so graciously on my poetry. It comes as no surprise that nature always connects to those "Higher domains." I hope you're having a wonderful & blessed week. /// Terrell

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