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The Cat In the Mist

The evening sky’s darken, falling slowly to the ground, Soft mist is filling the air with a whispering sound. A dim light from a lamp post exposes something down below, It’s a sleek black cat with a shiny coat moving very slow. I’ve never seen the likes of it, a smooth sophisticated stroll, Gazing upon him I question myself, is he tired hungry or cold I watch this silent creature move down the cool wet street, I wonder if there is a home, a someone waiting for him to greet. Perhaps he lives in the city with a pack of other cats, Or possibly he’s a loner and stays near the railroad tracts. If I knew for certain that this little guy lived all alone, There would be no hesitation for me to take him home. Author Eileen Clark

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Date: 7/10/2022 1:43:00 PM
I am a cat lover and I LOVE this poem.
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Eileen Clark
Date: 7/10/2022 2:07:00 PM
Thank you Andrea! =^..^= I am too.
Date: 7/8/2022 11:33:00 PM
A lovely poem. Well done.
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Eileen Clark
Date: 7/9/2022 11:03:00 AM
Thank you Jeanette
Date: 6/27/2022 3:06:00 PM
Lovely imagery and love for the loner.
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Eileen Clark
Date: 6/30/2022 11:59:00 AM
Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem Kim. I worry when I pass a cat that is on the road, It's often not a good thing and if it was just up to me, I'd stop and pick it up. =^..^=
Date: 6/27/2022 10:50:00 AM
Hello Eileen Clark, so nice to meet you. I am wondering if this black car has a home. Did it have a collar? Did you feed it and give it water? Just wondering. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/27/2022 4:13:00 PM
Hello Eileen, I have a Patch Tabby. She is 9 years old. A recuse. I have her now for 4 months. She is a sweetheart. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Eileen Clark
Date: 6/27/2022 12:37:00 PM
Hi Darlene, I own two sweet cats that are over ten years old now and I think how well cared for they are and I think of all the stray cats out there not so lucky. I made up the poem like many of my poems are. :) Nice to meet you and thank you for reading and commenting on my work. =^..^=

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