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calico housecat appears bearing limp chipmonk... meeeeow meeeow meee
When does a female lion roar?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 11/6/2014 12:57:00 PM
Offering you a limp chipmunk ? poor chipmunk. Poor calico housecoat. Love Sara...rajat
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Date: 10/31/2014 10:40:00 AM
Great one. Just spent two days looking for the kids cat. She was found and i had to go pick her up as the kids were at work. A escape artist that one. lol love phyl
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Date: 10/30/2014 9:18:00 PM
Dang cats. That is the only thing I don't like about them. anyway, this was a great haiku!!
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Date: 10/30/2014 12:20:00 AM
And they offer those dead creatures as a gift to us, yuck! Trust me I've seen many mice that our outdoor cats find and offer to us at our doorstep, such a pleasant way to start the morning's trek to work! I surely enjoyed reading your delightful and cleverly written poem here this evening! What a brilliant piece my friend, Great Work!!
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Date: 10/29/2014 10:37:00 PM
A warrior proud carrying his prize . . . the hunt, the chase, and the trespasser. Awesome haiku, loved it. Your question: whenever she wants, like most females in any species, especially human!
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Date: 10/29/2014 6:41:00 PM
this is fascinating with the crisp sound in the end, sara.. huggs
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Date: 10/29/2014 2:13:00 PM
I give you a top rating for an interesting haiku, Sara....for the fact that it makes me think; should a housecat (supposedly well fed) go hunting? or has it been neglected? I suppose a lioness roars when hunting or protecting her young! // paul
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Date: 10/29/2014 1:37:00 PM
wonderful haiku Sara! R we Supposed to solve some queries as Jan said ??
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Date: 10/29/2014 11:49:00 AM
Plain and simple great haiku.
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Date: 10/29/2014 11:35:00 AM
wonderful haiku I am not sure of the answer to the question - protecting young or looking for a mate would be my guess:-) Hugs Jan xx
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