Željko Sitar Poet Lyric

The Castle of My Dreams

The castle of my dreams has the purple windows.
Through this windows you can not see the widows,
only you can see are strange shadows
walking through the mirrors.

The thunder and an angel announce
a galactic storm with extremely changes
for all creatures in our false world.

The mining camp is empty, someone have taken all gold.
These are the same people who have stolen 
our freedom, our mind.

I know one thing about this life 
that the simple wishes never comes.
Only salvation is that you must escape from your mind
because the mind create wishes.

The castle of my dreams is defending us
from our screams, our fears.
The castle of my dreams is made 
by our diamond tears.

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Debbie Duncan July 15, 2012 at 5:37 PM very well done ,,,,, have a blessed day ;}

Charmaine Chircop March 23, 2012 at 9:10 AM The castle of my dreams is made by our diamond tears-A very profound verse to compliment this beautiful poem..lovely -Charma :)

M.I.A . March 18, 2012 at 1:45 AM simplicity is the hardest thing to achieve... beautiful poem from a thoughtful mind

Laura Breidenthal March 15, 2012 at 9:50 PM A very interesting and imaginative poem. I really enjoyed this. Always, Laura

Nette Onclaud March 14, 2012 at 12:26 PM my first time to read you, zeljko and i'm glad i did... wonderful visceral images and poetic insights.. lovely!.. a warm greeting to you for joining us..:) hugggs! Željko Sitar March 14, 2012 at 12:59 PM I am glad that you like this poem...and thanx for warm greeting.

Harry Horsman March 14, 2012 at 11:14 AM love this wonderful poem, such philosophy here, welcome to soup. harry Željko Sitar March 14, 2012 at 12:57 PM Thanx for welcome harry!

Poet Destroyer A March 14, 2012 at 7:01 AM Good morning ;-) zel, interesting poem , thank you for sharing your wonderful poem. Have yourself a good one*always~pd" Željko Sitar March 14, 2012 at 9:43 AM Thanx for reading my poem and I am very glad that you like this poem!

Carol Sunshine Brown March 14, 2012 at 6:02 AM A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Zeljko. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol Željko Sitar March 14, 2012 at 9:52 AM Thanx for warm welcome and I send you love from Croatia!

Madeleine Mclaughlin March 14, 2012 at 4:13 AM Vivid images and nice use of language. Željko Sitar March 14, 2012 at 9:54 AM Thanx Madeleine I appreciate that!!! :)))