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The Carpenters

We thought we were invincible, Fearless, there we stood. But somewhere to the rear We heard someone sawing wood. It was over the top for us, A fight was in the offing. But not for the carpenters, They were busy, making coffins.

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Date: 9/9/2017 10:13:00 AM
Oh my goodness Gary. A very powerfully written poem. Well done!
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Gary Smith
Date: 9/9/2017 10:48:00 AM
Thank you Heidi :)

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