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The Capitains Courage

"‡ Captain Courageous ¥ Twirling & Swirling Atop The Tides Of Time ¥ Dropping A Dime In The Jukebox Sublime ¥ To Play One Last Song Amid A Sweeet Loves Rhyme ¥ Captain Courageous ¥ HaHa. to which he says "Halifax!" a confusing conundrum which he often slurs. a condition that rum gives his words. after being left in the lurch, for falling in love with a convienience. Captian Courageous with his mind swirling and twirling atop tides of confusion. sailing into "Oblivion". playing that one last song over and over and over again. the song like prophecy came true in the end. so true about the Capitain and his departed friend. (collaboration with Ratchel St. Cross and The Situation)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/9/2012 2:56:00 PM
Impressive Situation! It's good that it all 'came true' in the end.
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Date: 2/6/2012 8:23:00 PM
Interesting my friend, had to read it several times to get the drift and did get a message. Falling in love with a convenience is really something to think about! P S at the end of your comments, who is that with no name? Is that allowed? Don't much like the conversation do you?
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The Situation
Date: 2/7/2012 11:53:00 AM
asking about fiends who sniff is definitly NOT allowed.
Date: 2/5/2012 3:19:00 PM
This is a very good write dear poets ! I'm thinking your form here could pass for a 'Narrative'. Have a wonderful week....much love, james
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Date: 2/1/2012 8:44:00 PM
Soup mail
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Date: 2/1/2012 7:41:00 PM
interesting theme, enjoyed it alot. great collab with Rarchel, TS. Thanks for stopping by
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Date: 2/1/2012 2:40:00 PM
Interesting work..Good that you two got together to write this work...Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Your time spent at my work is appreciated..Sara
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Date: 2/1/2012 9:24:00 AM
Nice write :-)
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Date: 1/31/2012 12:22:00 PM
very well written. by the way. :) God Bless, and take good care Situation.
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Lucinda Cayton
Date: 2/1/2012 8:00:00 AM
free atlast, thank God I am free at last from a friend that never was.
Date: 1/28/2012 10:06:00 AM
Smile ˜ I just love and simply adore sweeet Rachel thus, I Am, stocked * Hahahaha, by this fabulous coolab * Love always, John!:) ˜
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Lucinda Cayton
Date: 2/1/2012 4:09:00 PM
hey turd sniff, oh John yeah its pooh.
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Lucinda Cayton
Date: 1/31/2012 9:37:00 AM
eerie, kind of this place, forgive me if I do not visit your poetry, it is contratdictive in manner to me.
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The Situation
Date: 1/28/2012 11:57:00 AM
watch it sucker!!!
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Date: 1/28/2012 10:41:00 AM
Ummmmm :)
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Date: 1/28/2012 10:36:00 AM
...And, if I like your scent then, I may wish to Lick You, aneath the Blood red moon :)
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Date: 1/28/2012 10:22:00 AM
Ps Smile ˜ I have. Strong urggg, to sniffff You :)

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