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The Calming of Sutra

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"The Calming of Sutra" Morning always comes after night Moses like a wolf parts her red sea there Night rises she’s as warm as the sun He’s a strict machine (LadyLabyrinth / 2020) “A sutra is a condensed rule which succinctly states the message”

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John Castellenas

Date: 9/20/2020 7:52:00 PM

Loved the song and the words. I enjoyed the energy of the words. Thank you for sharing the entertaining words and song.

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 9/20/2020 9:02:00 PM

yeah, I was kinda vibing Anais Nin...

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 9/20/2020 2:51:00 PM

https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/the_strict_machine_1088895

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/20/2020 9:29:00 AM

Artful poem with satisfying depth, Lady, perfectly delivered in your succinct form!

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 9/20/2020 1:43:00 PM

Ah Marshall, a read from the past, shall have to lift the covers and peruse your prose. Yes depth is ultra important.

Ts Poetry

Date: 9/16/2020 4:50:00 PM

In the face of the Trinity one shall not be afraid

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 9/16/2020 4:55:00 PM

“What happened when the Verb asked the Noun to conjugate? She said "no-no!", forget the "o" and decided to become a nun"...