The Cabin

You can catch a fish at the lake I know
Or an aromatic breeze from the pines
Or chop wood if you must
Maybe you’d rather bask in the sunshine

Relax in the shade for a while then
With a cool glass of lemonade 
Listen to the loons on the water
Squelching their serenade

Try your luck with a pole on the dock at dusk
Hold tight—a big one out there
Reminisce at night over coffee by the fire
Telltales of the fish you spared

Snuggle in at night and take a deep breath
The air is always fresh at the lake
And hopefully by tomorrow morn
You’ll be greeted by a sun-filled daybreak
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Haley Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 8:01 AM
"The Cabin" A lakeside retreat unfolds in this warm, inviting piece. Loons sing fires burn, and the air stays fresh—a peaceful escape where nature and memory dance in quiet harmony.
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 8:39 PM
Hello James, this cabin sounds to me to be in a perfect spot by the water. Which would be peaceful by the water. Being by the wateris so relaxing. Have a nice evenig my friend.
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