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The Butterfly Effect

Be who you are by using what God has given you From a place of confinement Where days are predictable A reality to face by the repetition, When dreams seem unreachable, Hanging on to rituals for sustainment The focus needed to one's survival Yet not missing the faint notion Of moving toward a palpable Though unknown place of merriment. When the moment of transformation Is tangible, approaching, unstoppable Felt manipulated by forces in motion Apprehension and exhilaration in tremble Facing the unknown so close at hand Hanging on to the faith of a miracle For what is to come, searching the heavens Surrendering all, even if death is the pinnacle. Then when the Chrysalis opens (perfection) Lo and behold, indeed what a miracle! A new life is found, filled with sweet scents Wings open, excitement palpable Take flight, even if a little uncertain Free to reach dreams now attainable Never knew, in days of old, the extent Of the freedom to be found and heaven so undeniable. By CarolineCecile Copyright © 02.11.10

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/14/2010 11:58:00 AM
enjoyed reading, keep sharing
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Date: 2/12/2010 2:04:00 PM
This is another example of why you are one of my favorite poets, Caroline. Your description of the chrysalis turning into a butterfly is a great metaphor for the development of human life from one stage to the next. And the opening line is incredibly inspiring. Awesome, dear! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/11/2010 4:41:00 PM
Extremely descriptive and such a "beauty" to behold these visuals throughout your poem tonight Caroline.. an in depth adventure into the content from your title.. so enjoyed this read.. luv your word use.. thankxxx for the warm and gracious comments on my poetry also.. luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 2/11/2010 10:04:00 AM
Great write in this one. The transformation that happens looks just like the change from the caterpillar to the butterfly when a person's spirit is transformed. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work.Sara
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Date: 2/11/2010 6:49:00 AM
Caroline, this poem really "opened" up for me with the third stanza about the chrysalis. I loved this part of your poem. Very visual and beautiful message! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/11/2010 4:36:00 AM
Good work, keep em comin'.....:JP]
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