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The Butterfly and Fanciful Flight

The Butterfly and Fanciful Flight The butterfly flutters by, With wings spread deliberately wide. Its beauty is beyond the pale, Impossible it is to hide. It pauses as if frozen in time, Awaiting a response from the crowd. And immediately there comes a roar She is instantly very proud. And then as quickly as she appeared, She was soon seen no more. The crowd let out a groan, As she flew to distant shore.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/8/2014 8:32:00 PM
Dr Jim, Congratulations, in Kelly's Butterfly Fluttering By.. Sweet move... LINDA
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Date: 6/4/2014 2:29:00 PM
Congratulations on a beautiful win!
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Date: 6/5/2014 5:06:00 AM
Thanks!! I appreciate your comments....Jim
Date: 6/4/2014 4:50:00 AM
Great write Dr Jim ! congrats on ur win !
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Date: 6/5/2014 5:07:00 AM
Thanks!! Glad you liked t....Jim
Date: 6/4/2014 1:11:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win, Dr. Jim
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Date: 6/5/2014 5:07:00 AM
Thanks!! I appreciate your comments....Jim
Date: 6/3/2014 8:49:00 PM
I enjoyed the simplicity of your poem, and you beautifully captured that one moment, frozen in time. This was very nicely rhymed, as well, Dr. Jim! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 6/5/2014 5:07:00 AM
Thanks!! I appreciate your comments....Jim
Date: 5/27/2014 10:52:00 AM
Lol, here you see it, here you don't. Enjoyed your poem, Dr. Jim. Beautiful!
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Drjim Martin
Date: 5/27/2014 10:58:00 AM
Thanks Toquyen!! Glad you liked it....Jim

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