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The Butterflies Dance - Whitney

~The Butterflies Dance~
 (A Double Whitney)


 The sun is
 so warm and nice
 there is cheer 
 everywhere cause
 spring has sprung
 one more time and
 winter so cold is now gone.


 The robins
 have returned and
 the hibiscus 
 and the roses
 bloom again
 to my delight
 Now I see butterflies dance.



 Dorian Petersen Potter
 aka ladydp2000
 copyright@2012


 January.27.2015

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Graphite Drug November 7, 2016 at 3:13 PM "Spring has sprung," could be considered cliché, but overall the poem is simple, cheery, and has some bright imagery.

Balveen Cheema October 24, 2016 at 6:58 AM In autumn I feel your spring with robins and butterflies! May happiness spread! Balveen Dorian Petersen Potter October 24, 2016 at 3:27 PM Thank you ever so kindly Balveen, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D

Sabbath De Yecouba October 19, 2016 at 8:16 AM I can feel the spring springing. I can see hibiscus and roses bloom. I can also see the robins return. And finally, I feel warmth of the sun and coldness of winter. It's a nail on the head! Dorian Petersen Potter October 20, 2016 at 11:22 AM Thank you ever so kindly Mamer, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D

Richard Lamoureux October 17, 2016 at 10:00 AM I am not familiar with the form but I like the result. Dorian Petersen Potter October 20, 2016 at 11:21 AM Thank you ever so kindly Richard, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D

Mpho Kgaswane October 1, 2016 at 5:33 PM It is beautiful...Awakening too. Dorian Petersen Potter October 14, 2016 at 1:32 PM Thank you ever so kindly Mpho, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D

Payal Saxena September 23, 2016 at 11:44 AM Nice cute writing.. lovely beautiful images Dorian Petersen Potter October 14, 2016 at 1:31 PM Thank you ever so kindly Payal, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D

Bl Devnath September 23, 2016 at 10:19 AM Beautiful poem on natural beauty of winter my friend. Lovely. A 7. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl Dorian Petersen Potter October 14, 2016 at 1:31 PM Thank you ever so kindly BL, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D

Bl Devnath April 18, 2015 at 12:59 PM Excellent beauty of both pictures and the poem itself. A precious gem like. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl Dorian Petersen Potter October 14, 2016 at 1:30 PM Thank you ever so kindly BL, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D

Len Gasun January 28, 2015 at 6:59 AM I am a nature lover and this is such a very precious poem about nature my very dear friend, Dorian. So soothing and refreshing to the feeling as I read every line (fave). Hugging this gem of yours so much. Thanks a lot for sharing! Thanks a lot as well for your precious time stopping by on my poem leaving me your very encouraging comments. More blessings! love lots and big hugs, Leonora Dorian Petersen Potter January 28, 2015 at 5:33 PM Hi Leonora! Thank you so much my dear friend for your very kind visit and comments. Much appreciated! God bless you! Love and hugs! xxxxx D. ^O^

Kp Nunez January 27, 2015 at 8:59 PM What a pleasant read it is, dear Dorian. You always manage to write of things beautiful and inspiring and it speaks of your lovely soul . Such delightful imagery enhanced by your careful choice of pictures...Warm regards. Kim :) Dorian Petersen Potter January 28, 2015 at 5:36 PM Hello Kim! Thank you so much my dear friend for your very kind visit and comments. You're very sweet! Will visit your page very soon.Much appreciated! God bless you! :)Love and hugs! xxxxx D. ^O^

Emile Pinet January 27, 2015 at 2:34 PM As refreshing as a spring rain with its promise of renewal. The story like quality brings a friendly feeling to the reader and we can almost see the butterflies. Emile. #7 Dorian Petersen Potter January 28, 2015 at 5:37 PM Hello Emile! Thank you so much my dear friend for your very kind visit and comments. You're too kind! Will visit you very soon.Much appreciated! God bless you! :)Love and hugs! xxxxx D. ^O^