Charles Messina Poet Rhyme

The Bush Will Be On Fire

The bush will be on fire 
Long past I am gone 
By chance the flame burns out on me 
You've gotta keep on movin' on
 
By chance the flame burns out on you 
Before my day is due 
I'll keep on movin' on myself 
To keep that fire aflame for you

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Brandy Nicole September 9, 2022 at 7:36 PM "I'll keep on movin' on, to keep that fire aflame for you." This is beautiful, tender and emotional, all at the same time. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. Many wonderful blessings to you, Charles. Hugs, Brandy

Mike Gentile September 9, 2022 at 6:03 AM Life to be lived, love to be loved is what i read 'tween your beautiful lines Charlie!! A lovely read this morning! Happy Friday!!

Michael Tor September 9, 2022 at 5:09 AM Nicely done Charlie, an excellent theme you chose, and delivered on... Enjoy your weekend my friend...

Vijay Pandit September 9, 2022 at 4:45 AM I like the interplay of the two stanzas. Well written poem Charlie.

Heidi Sands September 8, 2022 at 4:34 PM Great one Charlie :) Charles Messina September 8, 2022 at 7:58 PM Thank you, Heidi :)