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The Bush Will Be On Fire

The bush will be on fire Long past I am gone By chance the flame burns out on me You've gotta keep on movin' on By chance the flame burns out on you Before my day is due I'll keep on movin' on myself To keep that fire aflame for you

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Date: 9/9/2022 7:36:00 PM
"I'll keep on movin' on, to keep that fire aflame for you." This is beautiful, tender and emotional, all at the same time. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. Many wonderful blessings to you, Charles. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 9/9/2022 6:03:00 AM
Life to be lived, love to be loved is what i read 'tween your beautiful lines Charlie!! A lovely read this morning! Happy Friday!!
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Date: 9/9/2022 5:09:00 AM
Nicely done Charlie, an excellent theme you chose, and delivered on... Enjoy your weekend my friend...
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Date: 9/9/2022 4:45:00 AM
I like the interplay of the two stanzas. Well written poem Charlie.
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Date: 9/8/2022 4:34:00 PM
Great one Charlie :)
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Charles Messina
Date: 9/8/2022 7:58:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi :)

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