The Brothers

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In this Sleep and Death defer: The former, On a daily return trip, us takes, The latter, Into a permanent one, without a chance of return!* © Demetrios Trifiatis 18 December 2019 * In Greek Mythology Sleep and Death are brothers.

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/18/2019 12:23:00 PM

Our final destination is a one way ticket, with the state of the world not sure I'd want to return Demetrios. Tom

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/18/2019 12:29:00 PM

Hahaha, wise choice my friend Tom. From what I have seen the last seven decades I am certain I don't wish to return. Thank you!

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/18/2019 8:16:00 AM

Hi Demetrios, I never heard of this. But when you think about it, I can see why they believe this exist in Greek Mythology. Enjoy the rest of your day my friend:-) Alexis

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/18/2019 10:43:00 AM

Well, my dearest Alexis there are many things we have never heard of but still exist. Hahaha. Thank you so very much for lovely visit! Hugs xxx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/18/2019 6:52:00 AM

Never thought about it that way--so well said my friend. Power in your words.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/18/2019 8:07:00 AM

Well, always there is a referent way to see things my friend, Vijay! Thank you so much!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/18/2019 3:42:00 AM

- No, no return ticket ... the last trip - Word of truth, my friend :) - Excellent written - hugs // Anne-Lise

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/18/2019 6:20:00 AM

Anne-Lise my dearest friend, pleased to see you! Thank you for your lovely comment! Hugs xxx

Na Na

Date: 12/18/2019 2:58:00 AM

Great Imagery. I enjoyed

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/18/2019 6:19:00 AM

Thank you dear, Gregory!