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The Broken Soul

A teenager who lost his soul And looked for someone to hold He finds her but he doesn’t know If he and she would fall in-love He fought his demons and sought for the light Many years until he thought he lost the fight But then here she comes and saves him from the dark Like an angel of love who clutched his heart Read my poems and you will know The story of The Broken Soul ------------------------ Written in: 2/27/2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/5/2011 10:39:00 AM
There is Sami, I been lookin for you. Glad to see you here now, and I am getting used to this place, too.. Well this is a pretty thoughtful poem, and I know a lot of people can relate to it, however, my advice is forget falling in love with her, cause when you check her feet, and her teeth and her speed at peelin potatoesHa ha hey Samy, I am in Newport news, I goin up to Williamsburg tonight for some good southern cookin. Watch ME fall in love now ha haha
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Date: 2/28/2011 10:21:00 AM
I can fully relate to this. Great lines!
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Date: 2/28/2011 6:04:00 AM
Your poetry reminds us of the depth in life that we all face at one time or another. It is food for much thought...thank you
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Date: 2/28/2011 5:57:00 AM
Nice write on the The Broken Soul, I have read, Sami
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