Sami Helbaoui Poet Rhyme

The Broken Soul

A teenager who lost his soul

And looked for someone to hold

He finds her but he doesn’t know

If he and she would fall in-love

He fought his demons and sought for the light

Many years until he thought he lost the fight

But then here she comes and saves him from the dark

Like an angel of love who clutched his heart

Read my poems and you will know

The story of The Broken Soul
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Written in: 2/27/2011

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Vee Bdosa March 5, 2011 at 10:39 AM There is Sami, I been lookin for you. Glad to see you here now, and I am getting used to this place, too.. Well this is a pretty thoughtful poem, and I know a lot of people can relate to it, however, my advice is forget falling in love with her, cause when you check her feet, and her teeth and her speed at peelin potatoesHa ha hey Samy, I am in Newport news, I goin up to Williamsburg tonight for some good southern cookin. Watch ME fall in love now ha haha

Poet Tacito February 28, 2011 at 10:21 AM I can fully relate to this. Great lines!

Judy Konos February 28, 2011 at 6:04 AM Your poetry reminds us of the depth in life that we all face at one time or another. It is food for much thought...thank you

Dr.Ram Mehta February 28, 2011 at 5:57 AM Nice write on the The Broken Soul, I have read, Sami