The Broken Cloud

When all feels bleak, or grey,
sometimes a cloud will break

and from within, the sun will fall
like lightning, thus brightening; 

A colorful painting
upon the meadows of one's wall.




(April 02 2016)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Davies Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 2:07 AM
Nice metaphorical imagery J, spiritual sunlight!
Roper Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 7:57 PM
You have created a moving picture of the bleak to the brightening of the sun, beautiful canvas. Thank you for reading my " Sentinel" Hugs dear friend
Tudor Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 3:35 PM
Your words captured the essence of the image of the lighthouse to perfection. Thank you for visiting Eve. J.
Salehi Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 1:05 PM
This is a nice painting... I can see the colors.
Tudor Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 8:36 PM
Pashang, you are very kind , and I thank you for visiting. J.
Hicks Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 3:51 AM
Gorgeous brevity. Really creative the way you carry double meanings .... "like lightning, thus brightening;" "thus brightening a colorful painting" ... your organize your thoughts in a very intriguing fashion, my friend. Imaginative and optimistic.
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April 4, 2016 at 8:39 PM
Timothy...what can I say, your comments energize and always lift me UP! J.
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