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THE BRIDE’S DREAMS - VIGNETTE

sweet smell of her envy perfume
drowned that stench of betrayal play
stygian smile blurred by church-white veil
her heart habitually astray

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Hilda Greenhough

February 13, 2025 at 8:07 AM

Not all dreams come true. I enjoy reading your poem.

thriveni c mysore

February 13, 2025 at 5:59 PM

Thank you for your pleasant visit dear poet. I am glad you liked the write, I just tried poet Suzette Richards's prompt of 'The Bride Trilogy' contest. thank you.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

February 12, 2025 at 3:07 PM

A gripping poem, that's so well written; the tale of marriage beginning on a sad note. I hope your day is wonderful, Thriveni.

thriveni c mysore

February 12, 2025 at 9:11 PM

I don't usually write on dark-themes dear friend, this is my first try for poet Suzette Richards's prompt of 'The Bride Trilogy' contest. Human psyche is unfathomable. Thank you for the kind visit and blessings, your visit means so much to me. thank you.

Janice Canerdy

February 12, 2025 at 7:47 AM

Very descriptive and expressive, Thriveni. Lord help the man who marries such a woman! Janice

thriveni c mysore

February 12, 2025 at 9:08 PM

This is my first such dark-write dear friend, I usually don't walk into dark emotions, I wrote this for poet Suzette Richards's prompt of 'The Bride Trilogy'. Tough one though, gave it a try. Thank you for your kind visit and precious time dear poet. Cheers

THE BRIDE’S DREAMS - VIGNETTE

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