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The Bride To Her Future Groom

THE BRIDE TO HER FUTURE GROOM

My heart quick-beats with Venus-strength,
the moon’s deep glow that shines with you.
Your love has lassoed the moon’s flow.
Its brightness, brings good tidings, to my soul.
I live to lift the corners of your lips
to meet my touch of happiness.

A rogue wave - handsome and daring,
i’ve tamed the tempest with a laugh.
I’ve calmed the mighty rage with love.
My small hand’s cosseted in yours,
together we ride seas of life,
in marriage bliss. We are thus blessed.

I pledge to you my tender touch
a boat upon the sea of life,
to see us through the dark, the day,
in sorrow and in blessings, dear.
You have nothing to fear with me.
Rest, love, upon devotion’s sails.

9/11/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Inman Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 12:06 AM
Kim, your line "I live to lift the corners of your lips," is wonderful. A lovely poem.
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October 8, 2017 at 6:12 AM
Kim, wonsderful placement for a wonderful poem. Congratulations :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 12:35 PM
Thank you, Darren! :)
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October 8, 2017 at 3:44 AM
Congratulations, Kim.
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October 8, 2017 at 5:40 AM
Thank you, Greg!
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October 7, 2017 at 8:22 PM
Congratulations on your win, Kim, nicely done ~`*
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October 7, 2017 at 8:33 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Dutta Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 7:38 AM
TOO NICE Kim. Love
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September 20, 2017 at 7:58 AM
Thank you so much, Anisha!
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September 12, 2017 at 2:54 AM
Lovely and romantic, Kim ... I enjoyed reading ... Enjoyed too your pleasure at reading my poem Hurricanes ... Thank you ...
Rodrigues Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 6:15 AM
Thank you!
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September 11, 2017 at 6:31 PM
this is SO romantic, Kim. LOVE it!!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 8:08 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea!
Pandit Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 3:38 PM
A lovely depiction of devotion and caring--well written--good luck for a win, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 8:08 PM
Thank you, Vijay!
Smith Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 1:19 PM
So romantic Kim
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September 11, 2017 at 1:20 PM
Thanks, Tim!
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