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THE BRIDE TO HER FUTURE GROOM My heart quick-beats with Venus-strength, the moon’s deep glow that shines with you. Your love has lassoed the moon’s flow. Its brightness, brings good tidings, to my soul. I live to lift the corners of your lips to meet my touch of happiness. A rogue wave - handsome and daring, i’ve tamed the tempest with a laugh. I’ve calmed the mighty rage with love. My small hand’s cosseted in yours, together we ride seas of life, in marriage bliss. We are thus blessed. I pledge to you my tender touch a boat upon the sea of life, to see us through the dark, the day, in sorrow and in blessings, dear. You have nothing to fear with me. Rest, love, upon devotion’s sails. 9/11/2017

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Date: 10/9/2017 12:06:00 AM
Kim, your line "I live to lift the corners of your lips," is wonderful. A lovely poem.
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Date: 10/8/2017 6:12:00 AM
Kim, wonsderful placement for a wonderful poem. Congratulations :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/8/2017 12:35:00 PM
Thank you, Darren! :)
Date: 10/8/2017 3:44:00 AM
Congratulations, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/8/2017 5:40:00 AM
Thank you, Greg!
Date: 10/7/2017 8:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Kim, nicely done ~`*
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/7/2017 8:33:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 9/20/2017 7:38:00 AM
TOO NICE Kim. Love
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/20/2017 7:58:00 AM
Thank you so much, Anisha!
Date: 9/12/2017 2:54:00 AM
Lovely and romantic, Kim ... I enjoyed reading ... Enjoyed too your pleasure at reading my poem Hurricanes ... Thank you ...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/12/2017 6:15:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 9/11/2017 6:31:00 PM
this is SO romantic, Kim. LOVE it!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/11/2017 8:08:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea!
Date: 9/11/2017 3:38:00 PM
A lovely depiction of devotion and caring--well written--good luck for a win, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/11/2017 8:08:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay!
Date: 9/11/2017 1:19:00 PM
So romantic Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/11/2017 1:20:00 PM
Thanks, Tim!

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