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The Bride To Her Future Groom

I promise not to leave you.
I promise my love.
I know you, my darling, were sent from above.

I promise loyalty.
I promise support.
My arms will encircle you and be your fort.

I'll stand by your side with love and with pride.
I'll give you my hand.
I'll be your bride.

So give me your promise to love me too.
And be with me today
In your suit of blue.

Promise me a smile in your quiet way.
And give me a kiss
To seal the day.



Copyright:  2005
For The Bride to Her Future Groom Contest - 1st Place

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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 8/14/2018 1:59:00 AM

Wow wow wow CONGRATS on this beautiful sensational poem that is so sweet to read that he ought to fall in luv with u head over heels , u r so pretty too eh. Awesome rhyme scheme, charming style. Warmest wishes m take care pal!

Carole Duet
Date: 8/14/2018 12:15:00 PM

Thank you so much, Zaynab. I wrote this poem for someone else who was getting married and she used it in the wedding ceremony. I was very honored that she did. I have not used it (yet) myself. lol

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/12/2018 4:57:00 PM

I have enjoyed reading this romantic poem. I hope it wins in the contest. have a nice eveningmy friend.

Carole Duet
Date: 1/13/2018 2:32:00 AM

Hi Darlene! I'm so glad you liked "The Bride to Her Future Groom". Yes, it did win 1st place in the contest in 2016. I was so happy because a real bride actually used this poem in her wedding ceremony. Thanks for reading. Carole :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/31/2017 7:39:00 PM

this is so pretty, Carole. I just decided to scroll down your page and wanted to see your TROPHY win. I had not seen it before. BIG belated congrats on your win and Happy New Year to you.

Carole Duet
Date: 12/31/2017 9:41:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. I wrote it many years ago but I think a pledge of true love never dies...but then, I'm a "romantic".

Christian Adeyemi

Date: 10/21/2017 6:41:00 PM

i was wondering what kind of talwnt ur waz, i forgot it something pure.

Carole Duet
Date: 10/23/2017 10:16:00 AM

Thank you, Christian. What a lovely comment! It's what I would say to my groom...if I had one. Lol. Carole Duet

Maria Williams

Date: 10/10/2017 1:14:00 AM

What a beautiful pledge from a loving brides to her groom Carole. Congratulations my dear, you deserve the honours. So well deserved...Maria xxx

Carole Duet
Date: 10/10/2017 2:09:00 PM

Thank you so much, Maria. I wrote it a while back but never got to use it myself as it was only a fantasy. I'm just glad that someone will actually get to use it now. :) Carole xox

Darren White

Date: 10/8/2017 6:12:00 AM

Carole! You got a nifty trophy :) Congratulations.

Carole Duet
Date: 10/9/2017 6:03:00 PM

Thanks, Darren. Really nice surprise and the best part is that the poem will be used by a real bride to a real groom in a real wedding! :) Carole Duet