The Bricks You Lay

Is your house built out of certainty,
   are the walls made thin or stout

Is your mind filled up with questions,
  do you live in fear or doubt

Is your spirit free or servile,
  is your will unchained or slave

Is your heart the trowel you build with,
  and love,
  —the bricks you lay 

(Villanova Pennsylvania: April, 2017)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Walker Avatar
May 6, 2017 at 11:59 PM
Beautiful, I love it !! The message, the rhythm and rhyme. A pleasure to read you. I have been reading other entries of yours. Rhyme is my favorite style also.
Melugin Avatar
April 22, 2017 at 1:15 PM
Kurt, You are writing with a trowel of gold! Building poetry that will last. 7 My best to you, chuck
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