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The Brick House

I'd rather bring up the topic, Not talking about, How she's the hottest, Just me being honest, Because who I wanted, Was the woman, I wanted to love. I want to open up my heart, About loving you, Yet I'm holding up my guard, And the words won't undo; They will not express, From my chest and exude, Yet I hope you're the one Who loves me too.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 8/14/2019 8:00:00 PM
Hola JT. I love the openness of your poem. When you're ready let them out...if this is not about your current life you have great empathy and have felt it once....from your chest and exude!
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Date: 4/6/2019 7:08:00 AM
I see that there is a brick wall which needs pulling down fast, my friend! Time to clear the way and find the courage to make the all important step. Regards // paul
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Date: 2/6/2019 5:11:00 PM
Great poem, hope things work out for you & your love interest this time! Best wishes! ;)
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Date: 2/4/2019 5:42:00 PM
Hello Honestly J.T. , Oh... you are in love. The lucky woman in your life. have a nice evening my friend.
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