The Briar Patch

(Or How My Legs Got This Way)

Bre’r Rabbit had his briar patch
A lovely place but there’s a catch
The briars and brambles cut and scratch
And it was there I met my match

We downed a model airplane there
It simply fell out of the air
We ventured in with utmost care 
For it had landed who knows where

The briars and brambles had no path
They grabbed our legs with fervent wrath
And gave our legs a real bloodbath
Now you can see the aftermath

Mdailey	6/7/11
If I could post a picture you would see bloody scratches all over my lower legs.  With 
my chemo, I don't heal as fast as I used to.  My doctor said to stay out of the briars 
as my blood will not clot very fast and I could lose a lot of blood.  Duh!
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Lacey Avatar
July 8, 2011 at 12:23 PM
not the leg's best day! lol
Brown Avatar
July 8, 2011 at 5:45 AM
I have enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning Mike. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, laughter, and loads of inspiration. I am so happy the Chemo is not getting you down. Love, Carol
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