Robin Wrenn-Fiore Poet I do not know?

The Breakup

You detached me from your regard.

You devalued me with your unkindness.

Your unapologetic apathy underscored my uselessness.

But, when you told me to get out, you were redundant.

I was already gone.

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Keith Bickerstaffe May 14, 2012 at 3:38 PM Ha ha! Good for you! (if this is actually factual.) If not, it's still a great piece. Great language, Robin. Best wishes, Keith Robin Wrenn-Fiore May 14, 2012 at 3:46 PM Aren't all good poems factual (unfortunately or fortunately for us)? Thank you for your kind words. Best wishes to you as well! Robinwrennfiore

Refilwe Tlhabanyane May 14, 2012 at 11:17 AM I like your style, its so short yet so loaded. Good work! Robin Wrenn-Fiore May 14, 2012 at 1:55 PM Thank you very much.

Richard Palmer May 12, 2012 at 11:49 AM straight to the point,nice Robin Wrenn-Fiore May 12, 2012 at 4:50 PM Thank you. I have a penchant to be wordy...concise was my goal.

Pace Ink-U-Script May 11, 2012 at 1:43 PM I enjoyed this poem you wrote here Robin....INK-U-SCRIPT Robin Wrenn-Fiore May 11, 2012 at 4:12 PM thank you

David Williams May 11, 2012 at 10:21 AM and a big welcome to the soup..David

David Williams May 11, 2012 at 10:20 AM Robin oh very well written..David Robin Wrenn-Fiore May 11, 2012 at 4:12 PM many thanks