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The Breakup

You detached me from your regard. You devalued me with your unkindness. Your unapologetic apathy underscored my uselessness. But, when you told me to get out, you were redundant. I was already gone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/14/2012 3:38:00 PM
Ha ha! Good for you! (if this is actually factual.) If not, it's still a great piece. Great language, Robin. Best wishes, Keith
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Robin Wrenn-Fiore
Date: 5/14/2012 3:46:00 PM
Aren't all good poems factual (unfortunately or fortunately for us)? Thank you for your kind words. Best wishes to you as well! Robinwrennfiore
Date: 5/14/2012 11:17:00 AM
I like your style, its so short yet so loaded. Good work!
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Robin Wrenn-Fiore
Date: 5/14/2012 1:55:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 5/12/2012 11:49:00 AM
straight to the point,nice
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Robin Wrenn-Fiore
Date: 5/12/2012 4:50:00 PM
Thank you. I have a penchant to be wordy...concise was my goal.
Date: 5/11/2012 1:43:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem you wrote here Robin....INK-U-SCRIPT
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Robin Wrenn-Fiore
Date: 5/11/2012 4:12:00 PM
thank you
Date: 5/11/2012 10:21:00 AM
and a big welcome to the soup..David
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Date: 5/11/2012 10:20:00 AM
Robin oh very well written..David
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Robin Wrenn-Fiore
Date: 5/11/2012 4:12:00 PM
many thanks

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