The Break Up

I kissed the lips that you can't lie through ,
                                           when you lied you called me friend .
                                         you let me go and there I was.
                                          girl you lied to me again.
 
                                          A twisted heart a broken mind 
                                           you'r blood it's what I crave,
                                           In you'r head oh I'm the sickness 
                                              but to you'r body I'll be it's grave.

                                          Cocain history blood shot eyes ,
                                           memories of our past , 
                                            before I'd ever go ,
                                             to hell to save your soul .
                                            I'd have to go slam me a blast .
      
                                              I can smell those lies you tell 
                                             before they ever leave you'r lips ,
                                              but I'll be there doin love to you'r body 
                                              before you'r honey drips .

                                             sick desires, twisted thoughts ,
                                               keep melting down on my brain .
                                            as life goes on without you .
                                             I feel a little less insane .

                                                                     James......................................

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/4/2011 10:20:00 AM
good strong write on the end of a romance... heartfelt write...Just one thing change "Brake" to Break... enjoyed your work today.....Michael
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