The Break of Dawn (Haiku)

Dawn opens the morn’
Sunrays reach across the skies 
To dance on the sea
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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December 14, 2008 at 1:37 PM
Nice use of imagery. I love the uplifting last line. Creative use of this short form. Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. I hope you have a wonderful holiday season. Karen
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September 24, 2008 at 6:38 AM
Adell, this is just so beautiful! Forget the fact that it's in perfect form and has terrific flow, the visual appeal is in the imagery you created, magnificent! Michael
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September 11, 2008 at 6:04 PM
absolutely breathtaking and very picturesque, I can see this forming, take care D-nyce
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September 10, 2008 at 5:48 AM
Oh Adell, how I would love to see the sun rise (or set) over the sea. A stunningly beautiful haiku. Love, Shar
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September 9, 2008 at 10:35 PM
Great descriptive Haiku , Adell , in perfect 5~7~5 format...
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September 9, 2008 at 6:02 PM
Lovely image!....~Carrie
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