The Break of Dawn

I don't sleep too well these days,
I have seen so many suns
arise, hoping for worries
to take the back seat
and demise.

The break of dawn
holds such beauty,
for that precious moment,
I'm not alone,
just a chid again,
and Gods wonder,
my home.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
May 17, 2009 at 7:28 PM
I know some days I feel like this. I can certainly relate.
Anderson Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 5:18 AM
God Bless Nicole
Loveless Avatar
May 15, 2009 at 10:38 AM
beautiful <3 Jessica
Peranteau Avatar
May 13, 2009 at 7:17 AM
Ann,....how did I miss commenting on this poem! Blah ! This is unique,...like ,..how do you catch a unique bunny rabbit ?,...you 'nque up on it! *smiles*,..truly,..this is a fine poem....TY james
Higgins Avatar
May 8, 2009 at 11:23 AM
There are towm mindset going on this piece as I read it..the first stanza shows hopelessness, while the last stanza gives some hope...this is a piece that makes me think..thanks for the comments on my poem this morning.
Rhinem Avatar
March 30, 2009 at 7:50 PM
Smile~"Hello Precious, Blessed & Beautiful Ann Anderson!":)~I sincerely hope that Your life is treating You extremely wonderfully dear lady!:)~I love the comfort of reassurance that I see within this write!:)~For it makes my heart very happy, to know and believe that "Your Priceless Heart" has found such a state!:)~Smile~So don't 'ever' let go of this truth dear lady!:)~And, always know, "That I Send 'You & Your Loves' My Love Forever, Always, John!:)
Devonshire Avatar
March 29, 2009 at 9:11 AM
Love the way you describe, "I have seen so man suns arise, hoping for worries to take the back seat." Beautiful image of hope!
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