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The Boy I Left Behind

I've been thinking of a boy I used to know. Seems like only yesterday, Was it so very long ago? We parted ways, I don't know when, I'd like to find that boy again. Would he approve if he could see The man that he grew up to be? So many years have come and gone since then, And time takes a heavy toll. Forever young will he remain While I have grown so old, And memories begin to dim Of places I might look for him. How much that world I knew has changed. Or has it just been rearranged? I've been wondering what would happen should I find Somewhere, tucked away, The boy I left behind. What would he say? Would he like me, or despise me? Would he even recognize me? Was that his voice whispering in my head? "I'm not the one who changed," it said.

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Date: 9/28/2022 11:51:00 PM
Such a lovely, sweet poem. I got so interested in the child's view, I wrote a whole book about it. Which only I read. But it has been a wonderful experience. Elizabeth
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Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 9/30/2022 10:26:00 PM
I should have added that I've been putting excerpts on the short story section in case you are interested in the child's eye view. It's called "Marguerite." Elizabeth
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 9/29/2022 9:33:00 AM
Good for you, Elizabeth, and thank you.
Date: 9/28/2022 3:57:00 PM
this is beautifully poignant, jim! i particularly love the lines "would he like me, or despise me? would he even recognize me?" i guess we can all wonder about how our childhood selves would view us now, but most of us wouldn't even have had that thought. glad you did!
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 9/29/2022 9:32:00 AM
Thank you, Ilene. It took me a long time to work up the courage to write this. I'm still not quite sure if I have enough to know the answer to that question.
Date: 9/28/2022 11:19:00 AM
A chill over my entire body as if touched by a crisp wind... thank you for the journey!
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 9/28/2022 11:23:00 AM
Thank you, Becky.

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