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The Bottle of Life

To life I would bottle thee to see how long I have To death Lets wait and see when the bottles empty how proud of life I'll be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/25/2010 11:01:00 AM
Excellent poem!
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Date: 1/25/2010 1:08:00 AM
Michael. This is GREAT!!! (If these are your thoughts and feelings, you might choose lyric as a poetry form...) At any rate, you have masterfully written about life and death. Perfection! Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/24/2010 1:22:00 PM
Interesting poem, On your comment on Joyous giving, see soup mail, thanks for your comments.
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Date: 1/23/2010 8:24:00 PM
This is a very neat poem. It has a lot of meaning to it. And thank you for your comment on my poem.
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Date: 1/23/2010 8:06:00 PM
nicely succinct!
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