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The Body, the Mind and the Soul

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Written 8 March 2023: Placed 5th in Up to You Again Poetry Contest of Brian Strand

Resubmitted to Premiere VII- Open Poetry Contsest of Rob Carmack

The Body, the Mind and the Soul When the body battered by fate And worn out with worrying age Reaches quite a delicate state In the midst of life`s final stage, When the body twinges with pain And walking a hundred footsteps At a stretch is a task in vain, When climbing a dozen of steps Leads to outright gasping for breath, I feel like taking a due rest Instead of still moving uphill At the behest of my own will. When the mind is as ever strong And the spirit is still quite fresh, When the self is as ever young And the soul is as ever blessed, They long for sweet verses to frame And divine hymns to sweetly air, They long for the light of their flame To impart to those with a flair, They long for emotions to share With those who truly wish to care, They long for their thoughts to partake Amidst those with a real stake. As the seat of reason, the mind Aims at a fine balance to find Between what body does cherish And what the ego does relish While the sole yearning of the soul That does body and mind control, Rules over the heart and the will, Holds desires at a cute standstill, Reigns over thoughts and the passion And leads the imagination, Is not to retreat, nor to bend But to trail its goal to the end. Squeezed in the midst of the cravings Of the body, mind and the soul, Can I construe which chord to string! As the Lord sways and and controls The whole universe and the soul, A very minute particle Of the eternal Supreme Soul, As a creature meek and humble Let me cede myself to His will That He may guide my path until The end of my journey in life, Until the last breath I shall strive.

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Date: 3/8/2023 12:17:00 PM
Congratulations on this winning work for the contest. It is a good work and I enjoyed reading it. I especially like the last six lines. Thank you for sharing. Sara
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 3/8/2023 6:25:00 PM
Thanks Sara for your very positive comments. The poem expresses what and how I felt before being admitted in a private hospital for undertaking medical tests and treatment some ten days back.

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