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The Body of Water

By the pond the fireflies fly,the water it shines from the sun in the sky. Ripples come from the fish below,the wind makes the cattails blow. What a simple pleasure in my life,freeing me from my pain and striff.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/14/2010 12:11:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your free verse creative write tonight... an expressive piece in a few words..check out the contest scene to enter and good luck with luv..
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