The Blue Jays

As the blue jays fly Coming to the deck Peanuts are thrown out They gather to feed Then bellies full fly away.

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/8/2020 3:14:00 PM

Blue jays are amazing! When my belly's full, I can't fly! LOL. Thanks, Darlene. ~ Gershon

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/8/2020 5:32:00 PM

Hello Gershon Wolf, thanks for the laughter. Your welcome. Thnks for end.

Matthew Anish

Date: 12/14/2019 7:41:00 PM

I enjoy feeding the birds at times myself. Usually just pigeons not the pretty blue jays you describe in your stimulating poem. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/15/2019 2:28:00 PM

Hello Matthew Anish, I not only feed the birds, i feed the squirrels as well. So nice to see you here. Thank you for your lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/13/2019 6:45:00 PM

a sweet little poem on then, Darlene!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/14/2019 6:55:00 AM

Hello Andrea,Thank you for the lovely comment. The blue jays come to the deck every day for peanuts. Have a nice day my friend.Hugs Darlene