The Blood Stained Bridge

Into the timeless wood he fled, running from the night
While demons of his past gave chase beneath the pale moonlight
The man dressed in soiled rags, filth of his own making
Had spent a life unto himself, all others there forsaking.

But in the night, as shadows came, though nothing made a sound
A voice there in the dark he heard, though no one was around
Calling out to him by name, “Go… seek the blood stained bridge
Its ageless timber, dogwood made, up on yon high ridge.”

Somehow, he knew the voice he heard while running from the night
Was not from friend or foe without, but came from deep inside
So run he did through elder wood, to find the yon high ridge
The Voice there still was guiding him to reach the fabled bridge.

In agony, all power spent, found he the edge of night
His demons dogged him all the way and pressed him for a fight
The host advanced and pushed him back, back toward yon high ridge
But, when he turned to his dismay, he found no “saving” bridge.

He questioned if the voice he heard and trusted in the night
Was naught but wishful thinking; a last ditch hope-filled lie
In anguish and frustration there, he stood in fear and pain
And cursed his stubborn nature that kept him bound in shame.

Despairing for the life he’d lived, in fear of coming death
He fell there on the shifting sand and cried with his last breath
“I’m sorry for the things I’ve done and regret the life I’ve led”
He turned then to accept his fate, but there appeared the bridge instead.

The shadows all began to fade, his soul started to mend
As he took the first step ‘cross that bridge, the night came to an end
Waiting on the other side, the risen sun in brilliant light
The Voice within him beckoned, “Come,” then freed him from the night.


                                                                 ~Christopher Thor Britt
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 3, 2016 at 3:12 PM
Splendid poem, Thor. I love that name, I'm saying it again. Great poem, Thor. Nice message to boot. Love always. RW
Horsch Avatar
November 19, 2013 at 6:52 AM
This Is a very good poem. Congrats on your win.
A   Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 6:11 PM
Christopher, . ;) Congratulation, on your winning fantasy poem... Sending Smiles. *LINDA*
Richards Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 10:23 AM
This is so wonderful, Christopher....so .well deserved is your win !
Mehta Avatar
November 17, 2013 at 11:59 PM
Congratulations on the fine win, Christopher
Onclaud Avatar
November 17, 2013 at 11:13 PM
spine tingling all the way down. christopher.. congrats!..:) huggs
A  Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 10:50 PM
Christopher ,a beautiful winning poem. Enjoyed reading every crossing bridge win. Hugs ~ SKAT ~
Lamoureux Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 8:10 AM
Brilliant, my personal favorite hands down! Congratulations.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 7:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Chris xx
Bantawa Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 5:02 AM
a lovely one, congrats Christopher!
Mehta Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 9:22 PM
Congrats on the win in the contest of Deb, Christopher
Posey Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 8:17 PM
Some how I knew that salvation would come with the SONLIGHT... Magnificent writing... I was blessed by every word ... Regards.... Jake
Britt Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 9:42 PM
Yah...you get it, John. I didn't figure the allegory to be too deeply cloaked. Thanks for the note. CTB
A   Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 6:45 PM
Christopher, , Congratulations on your Crossing That Bridge win.... always & forever :) LINDA
Britt Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 9:41 PM
Thanks Linda. Much love back to you. CTB
May Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 1:07 PM
congrats on your win with this awesome poem Chris
Britt Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 9:41 PM
Thanks Joseph. I enjoyed yours as well.
Horsch Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 12:09 PM
Great win Chris, Your brother Roger
Britt Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 9:40 PM
Thanks bro! I want to encourage all who see this post, to read Roger's entry in this contest. You'll love it. CTB
Britt Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 9:40 PM
Thanks bro! I want to encourage all who see this post, to read Roger's entry in this contest. You'll love it. CTB
Onclaud Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 11:04 AM
special cheers on your win, timothy..:) huggs
Britt Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 11:34 AM
Thanks. Who's Timothy?
Duncan Avatar
October 31, 2013 at 1:44 AM
Well this is awesome ;}
Britt Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 11:36 AM
Thanks, Debbie
Hlabisa Avatar
October 30, 2013 at 9:09 AM
lovely art. It is exceptionally a gift you have there. This must have taken quite some time to get perfect, cause this is beautiful man, keep up the hard work
Britt Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 11:36 AM
Hi Sizwe, Thank you for taking the time to leave me a comment. With appreciation, CTB
Richards Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 1:41 PM
ps.....And.... thank you so much for your kind words and comments on my poetry....your words made my day !! :) I do so appreciate your opinion.
Richards Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 1:39 PM
This is an amazingly rich with metaphor.....the struggle to find the light, crossing the bridge of the night, into the rays of the sun.....a life and death introspection we can all identify. Wow!
Britt Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 11:37 AM
Thanks Carrie. A compliment from a great poet like you is a blessing. CTB
Van Breda Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 8:28 AM
This is an epic !! A story of introspection then redemption portrayed so well xx
Deschler Avatar
October 28, 2013 at 11:41 PM
I absolutely love this poem, and the story you told within it. You are an amazing writer, Christopher! Excellent poem! I am adding this one to my favorites!...Thank you so much for the great comments, once again.
Peterson Avatar
October 26, 2013 at 5:49 PM
Very engaging and well crafted. I didn't want it to end. Reminded me of one of mine, not so well done: "Then Comes a Day." Mark
Horsch Avatar
October 26, 2013 at 2:37 PM
Another Masterpiece by the writing Moo. I just loved it. Until next time... Roger
Britt Avatar
October 26, 2013 at 3:44 PM
Roger. Thanks for being my biggest fan, bro, as I am yours. I don't think it will be too long before others realize that we are actually brothers...though Linda (Poet Destroyer) already knows.
May Avatar
October 26, 2013 at 2:20 PM
well penned..I enjoyed it much
Britt Avatar
October 26, 2013 at 3:41 PM
Thank you, Joseph. Very kind.
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