Get Your Premium Membership

The Blood of Forgotten Oaths

Steel-bound words once carved in stone, Now rust in whispers, dead and alone. The oaths we swore in fire and ash, Lie shattered now—mere ghosts of past. A blade was drawn, a wound was made, Yet scars still whisper, cold and frayed. Beneath the weight of silent screams, The echoes writhe, the soul redeems. Ink turns black beneath the skin, A tale of ruin carved within. The hands once strong now shake in dust, Their bones betray their hollow trust. A crimson sun, a starving tide, A love undone, a fate denied. The night is long, the shadows call, They dance in halls where secrets fall. A requiem hums in fractured breath, Where promises drown and love meets death.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/15/2025 7:14:00 AM
Quite bleak but reads well. Hey, belated welcome to PS!
Login to Reply
Bhattacharya Avatar
Puroja Bhattacharya
Date: 5/15/2025 7:17:00 AM
Thanks sir. I am glad to receive your valuable opinion.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things