Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

The Blanket

A light blanket of clouds covers
the sun, and fog drapes the trees
Crispness fills the still September air
rendering a sense of ease

An illuminating sun peeks through
Sleepy eyes lift the blanket
Autumn's touch is welcome here
Ripe pears nature's banquet 

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Ma Yaseen September 25, 2014 at 5:09 AM perfect use of images and a deep thought preserved.... 7 stars

Norma Arana September 25, 2014 at 2:02 AM Such graceful contentment stirred by your engaging metaphors.. a lovely autumn day from your gold pen, Sara..

Justin Bordner September 23, 2014 at 8:28 PM Autumn does deliver a sense of comfort, its like the final accomishment of summer. And hearts do seem ripened by apparent effortless movement of summer to autumn, one last performance of nature's fertility. I enjoyed this poem very much Sara, where I live Autumn is moving in the sir. J.A.B.

Harry Horsman September 23, 2014 at 9:55 AM this is a lovely visual poetry,,,,hope you ok Sara

Ravi Sathasivam September 22, 2014 at 3:51 AM Excellent. Wonderful imagery write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Matthew Anish September 21, 2014 at 10:05 PM Excellent reflection on the season! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Paul Callus September 20, 2014 at 9:15 AM Enjoyable autumn's touch as the blanket of fog slowly lifts as sun's rays creep through. lovely imagery. // paul

Dr.Ram Mehta September 20, 2014 at 8:27 AM A pleasing soothing word-picture you have created, sara

Casarah Nance September 19, 2014 at 6:45 PM Wish I could curl up in that light blanket and rest peacefully. Beautiful images sweetie :)

Poet Destroyer A September 19, 2014 at 6:32 PM This is very pretty, I enjoy the sight of nature, always....Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen September 19, 2014 at 3:59 PM - Thank you for your beautiful writing today, Sara - Happy weekend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison September 19, 2014 at 3:22 PM wonderful imagery Sara this is a beautiful write:-) Hugs Jan xx