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The Blanket

A light blanket of clouds covers
the sun, and fog drapes the trees
Crispness fills the still September air
rendering a sense of ease

An illuminating sun peeks through
Sleepy eyes lift the blanket
Autumn's touch is welcome here
Ripe pears nature's banquet 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/25/2014 5:09:00 AM
perfect use of images and a deep thought preserved.... 7 stars
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Date: 9/25/2014 2:02:00 AM
Such graceful contentment stirred by your engaging metaphors.. a lovely autumn day from your gold pen, Sara..
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Date: 9/23/2014 8:28:00 PM
Autumn does deliver a sense of comfort, its like the final accomishment of summer. And hearts do seem ripened by apparent effortless movement of summer to autumn, one last performance of nature's fertility. I enjoyed this poem very much Sara, where I live Autumn is moving in the sir. J.A.B.
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Date: 9/23/2014 9:55:00 AM
this is a lovely visual poetry,,,,hope you ok Sara
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Date: 9/22/2014 3:51:00 AM
Excellent. Wonderful imagery write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Date: 9/21/2014 10:05:00 PM
Excellent reflection on the season! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/20/2014 9:15:00 AM
Enjoyable autumn's touch as the blanket of fog slowly lifts as sun's rays creep through. lovely imagery. // paul
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Date: 9/20/2014 8:27:00 AM
A pleasing soothing word-picture you have created, sara
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Date: 9/19/2014 6:45:00 PM
Wish I could curl up in that light blanket and rest peacefully. Beautiful images sweetie :)
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Date: 9/19/2014 6:32:00 PM
This is very pretty, I enjoy the sight of nature, always....Linda
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Date: 9/19/2014 3:59:00 PM
- Thank you for your beautiful writing today, Sara - Happy weekend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/19/2014 3:22:00 PM
wonderful imagery Sara this is a beautiful write:-) Hugs Jan xx
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