The Black Widow

Dark and lean she spins her web preparing for her prey.
Intelligent and diligent she works both night and day.

She is by no means evil, for this is all she knows.
A genetic trait passed down to her and so the story goes.

When her work is done she will prepare for her scheme.
To lure her helpless victim in her well constructed gleam.

A tattoo on her stomach, he stops and steals a glance.
Her beauty and her mind combined, he doesn't stand a chance.

He goes in for a closer look not knowing what he'll find
She has her victim now and when they're done he's confined. 

He never knew what hit him for she won't suffer him his pride.
Her mission is accomplished, and her legacy's inside.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Callus Avatar
January 6, 2021 at 1:56 PM
I find spiders a source of inspiration, but so do you! One could take this at face value, or else give it added value by treating it as a metaphor. Both work for me. ~ Regards // paul
Crabtree Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 1:29 PM
Thank you, Paul. I think this is one of my better poems. Have a great day :)
Moreno Avatar
April 15, 2009 at 11:01 AM
Nice work Astrid and congrats on your feature...Raul
Curcio Avatar
April 15, 2009 at 10:12 AM
Very well done! Reminds me of the true crime shows I watch where the wife kills off her husband. Very visual, and I liked the little twist of a tatoo on her stomach, like the hourglass design on the spider's abdomen. Congrats on having this one featured
Craft Avatar
April 14, 2009 at 2:45 PM
I love thisss<3
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
April 14, 2009 at 11:46 AM
I am impressed. You have made a creature, the female black widow spider, that can be deadly look like a "Fairy Princess" well, sort of...LOL Nice write Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. l
Austin Avatar
April 14, 2009 at 6:42 AM
Congrats on this selection. We have lots of daddy long legs. I have to rescue them from the shower once in awhile. They definitely don't like to get wet. Love, daver
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April 13, 2009 at 4:01 PM
Nice use of rhyme to share your story. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Enjoy your honor. Best wishes. Karen
Nutter Avatar
April 13, 2009 at 12:21 PM
Congratulations On Your Poem Being Featured This Week.
Winter Avatar
April 13, 2009 at 11:14 AM
Hi Ivy! Hope life is treating you well! Congrats on your awesome poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
Brown Avatar
April 13, 2009 at 6:19 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Ivy. May you have many more featured in the future. Love, Carol
De La Keur Avatar
April 13, 2009 at 5:36 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week and though I am SO afraid of spiders, they are HARD workers and this was a beautiful couplet, you tell their story perfectly....Aleera
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