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The Black Cloud

when things are looking rosy and you feel like youre a king every one is smiling but one tiny little thing descends around your person and alarm bells start to ring your friends dont want to know you you feel like youre alone your house is round the corner but a million miles from home the quick way out is looking good you wont be missed for long the priest will say how good you were as they play your final song it could have been so different i could have made you proud i could have been a different man if it wasnt for that cloud

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Date: 12/14/2009 3:26:00 PM
As I am sitting here reading your wonderful poetry today, I would like to thank you Brian. First I would like to thank you for writing and sharing your poetry (whether one poem or a thousand) here at PoetrySoup.Second I would like to thank you for all your kind comments to me and to all the other excellent poets also. I wish you all the best in life and in your writing endeavors in 2010. Love and blessings to all, Carol
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